Tools:
I did not see the goggles until I read the critique. Even still, I have to look for it every time I see the picture. I love how the nail sadly stands there with the hammer lying exhausted a little bit away.

Athlete:
Very good lighting. The shadows under your chin and your eyes are perfect. Also, the athlete is in perfect focus, while the weights in the fore- and background are out of focus, yet clear enough, bringing attention to the subject of the photo. The drop of sweat and the look of concentration really make this picture – as if you are very serious about your athletics.

Letter:
I love this shot; it is so quaint. The main problem is that the flag looks plastic and very modern. Is it plastic or silk, or neither? Also, I would have liked to see more detail on the letter itself. As the instructor said, the highlight detail here was lost. Does the letter start “My dear Jenny?” I really like the pen. Where did you find it?

Large:
I find myself feeling bewildered with this photo. The words on the cards seem to be motion blurred, and I feel like I have to catch up with them so I can read them. The contrast between the two was lost on me at first, because I could not read the 64MB. Your addition of the 6 is well done. It looks like it belongs!

It is so hard to be honest when critiquing your work! But, in reality, I don’t think you would appreciate me be dishonest, would you?

Keep up the good work!

Allen

BTW, did you Photoshop in the drop of sweat on your cheek in the 2nd picture? Just curious – it looked a bit too perfect.